12 Brothers - The Music: Business

Here is my solo acoustic demo for Business. By and large, the original lyrics. I even like the "fathers" bit in the second verse. Sorry, I didn't have the energy to put together a proper demo. If I remember correctly, this was one of the more popular songs at the Zeitgeist show.


Jeremy said...

Very nice! I love it! Excellent job putting an emotional punch at the end of the song.

I do wish this was a full band demo, though. Maybe you could work that up.

But I'll give you a passing grade and proceed with posting more lyrics. Look for something later today or tomorrow.

Carl Provost said...

Yeah that one was real popular, Mom loved it!

Jeremy said...

Awww, don't be like that, Cuz!

Doesn't Joshua sound a little like Jonah Matranga?

Jeremy said...

Joshua, you should start a band called "Joshua's twolinesketches".

Jeremy said...

That chorus is growing on me. The final lines work pretty well, too. It's funny how something can sound really bad/cheesy, but when it's sung it just flows.