2005-04-27

12 Brothers - The Music: Business

Here is my solo acoustic demo for Business. By and large, the original lyrics. I even like the "fathers" bit in the second verse. Sorry, I didn't have the energy to put together a proper demo. If I remember correctly, this was one of the more popular songs at the Zeitgeist show.

4 comments:

Jeremy said...

Very nice! I love it! Excellent job putting an emotional punch at the end of the song.

I do wish this was a full band demo, though. Maybe you could work that up.

But I'll give you a passing grade and proceed with posting more lyrics. Look for something later today or tomorrow.

Jeremy said...

Awww, don't be like that, Cuz!

Doesn't Joshua sound a little like Jonah Matranga?

Jeremy said...

Joshua, you should start a band called "Joshua's twolinesketches".

Jeremy said...

That chorus is growing on me. The final lines work pretty well, too. It's funny how something can sound really bad/cheesy, but when it's sung it just flows.